Monday, 21 March 2011

Synopsis draft 4

Jay pulls up outside the house in his car. He waits in the car for a little while and twirls around his wedding ring. Cuts to Claire in the kitchen, on her laptop. Music can be heard in the background. Jay gets out of the car and heads towards his front door. Opens the door and goes into the closet to put his coat away. Can hear his wife typing away frantically on her laptop. Jay looks anxious. Cuts to Claire typing ‘brb just going toilet’ and heads towards the toilet which is located next to the closet. As soon as the door locks jay decides to take a loser look. We can see she has been having a conversation with someone called Simon in which they have been sharing their feelings for each other and arrange to meet up. Suddenly the chain flushes. Jay walks slowly out of the kitchen and stands in front of the toilet door. As Claire opens the door she jumps back looking worried. Jay leans past to wash his hands. Claire looks scared and clenches away. And edges back into the kitchen. Jay stays in the bathroom drying his hands. Claire quickly attempts to sat goodbye to Simon, when jay walks in. Claire quickly closes the laptop lid and talks to jay.